Show, don’t tell

I think I’ll use this paragraph from now on to illustrate the above principle:

F Train

I only took the F once while I was super pregnant, and it was the worst. None of the Park Slope dads or book editors looked up from their copies of The New Yorker for a second to even consider offering me a seat. I wanted to strangle them all with their Strand tote bags.

From NY Mag‘s “The Cut” blog

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